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- Battalon127, Aug 3, 2007 02:18
Comments welcome
Provided anyone reads this, feel free to leave criticisms, good or bad. Just be specific.
Regardless of whether or not anyone reads this, I'm planning to update regularly- once a week for the remainder of the summer, if I can manage. I figure if I give myself a deadline, something specific, I stand less of a chance of just letting the whole thing die. What will happen come school is anyone's guess. Reply
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- Blade, Aug 3, 2007 02:31
Re: Comments welcome
Great writing, subject isn't to interesting to myself as I'm not of America but I will continue to read as the current plot seems interesting. Reply
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- MintMan, Aug 3, 2007 02:45
Death to America?
Well, I don't think this story is really going to be too much of a political commentary on America. I think it is gonna concentrate more on the character and situation induced by that whole set-up.
Gotta agree that politics ain't my cup o' tea, either, but post-cataclysmic army story? That'll keep my interest.
The subject matter would matter a lot more than the writing style if this were an IAS; I am so glad it isn't for a variety of reasons, resident hippies among them. Reply
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