- Zedd, May 21, 2006 01:52
I think I fixed it. Anything else I need to do? And sorry about that post. 'Twas made in haste (I thought I had longer than I did to make it, and thus was cut off before my re-read of the previous post.) Reply
- MintMan, May 21, 2006 12:20
Next time you find yourself running out of time, just post a quick finish at the deadline and quickly lock the topic again for an edit. That is what I have done.
Yeah, the story has been crawlin' slowly, so we aren't expecting you to reread the story with every new addition you make. That's why those reports were added -- to keep things on track.
Nothing else is errant, although I am a bit confused about the conversation about runes. It seems to come from no place and go right back there. Am I missing the significance of that bit or what? Reply
- Zedd, May 21, 2006 17:34
I'm just correcting myself from earlier. It has little other significance, other than cementing that Zedd comes from somewhere else. Reply
- MintMan, May 21, 2006 18:20
Just a little strange to bring it up like that and not even do anything with it.
I mean, Geirrek brings it up for truthfully no reason at all. He is just looking at his face when he blurts out that the mark is not a rune. Then, he goes into a very dictionary definition of runes... I dunno, it just sorta seemed tacked-on and unnecessary to me, especially bringing it up again at this point in the story. Reply
- Zedd, May 22, 2006 03:40
Well, I'll try to make it seem a more natural progression. I don't know about doing anything with it... Gaah, most-edited post in the history of RPEx. Reply