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Zedd, Dec 21, 2006 08:15

Any better?

At least now there is some form of direction, I s'pose. Anyway, hopefully that helped some.Arrow Reply

MintMan, Dec 21, 2006 10:50

Better

Falken has some personality now: murderous hard-ass :D

The degrees of mutation have been descripted: physical and super-powered.

The protagonists were given a distinct disadvantage: less advanced weaponry. (Good stories should have underdog heroes; perfect ones are for chumps!)

A new genre was added: action!

Plenty of questions were asked, and since none of these questions were "What's the plot supposed to be?", I'd say very good! Too bad Falken won't have his cyborg motor now ;_;Arrow Reply

Blade, Dec 21, 2006 16:07

Re: Better

Bahaha good work, this is what I wanted to see.Arrow Reply

Zedd, Dec 21, 2006 16:13

Character

Well, I should have mentioned this earlier, but Rai can do things with vision and sound and stuff (like the fact that nobody sees him unless he wants them to). He's also somewhat of a 'security' guy, so he can do stuff with locks and computers et cetera.Arrow Reply

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